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Homework seven is the completed annotations for assignment two, and thus, it is a continuation from my write-up on homework six. At that point, I had a much better vision of what my paper should cover and how I planned to group my sources together. It really shows in how the annotations appear less cluttered (and more substantive). Part of the reason for this change was because I had gotten through reading my sources and had time to think about their main ideas. The problem that still lingered though, was the volume of information I had included in my paraphrasing (a good portion of it became irrelevant as I started writing the paper and revising). I almost fell into the trap of mistaking personal interest with relevance, and since I was encountering so many interesting ideas at the time, I felt compelled to write about them just in case I ended up using the information. Overall, the experience was rewarding and enriching.